A writing task

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

In today’s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
 
There are many news stories on the Internet showing that when an employee makes mistakes, he or she will get fire from company. There are some people believe that it is more considerable to work fast and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and accuracy. However, I prefer to put accuracy and slowly work in the first place.
 
Firstly, accuracy is the most significant factor in the workplace instead of how fast you did. According to a survey recently conducted by the UCLA mental department, being asked a question that whether a work with quickly and risk making mistakes is more important than accurate and slowly work, among one hundred employers who come from different departments, more than fifty of them expressed that they were in strong disagreement of the statement. As the investigation went further, a randomly selected woman expressed that most of the employers in the world are gladder to see the accuracy project from their employees since it shows that they take this work seriously. Besides, according to her, what cannot be neglected is that a fine impression which means a accuracy work is more considerable than the speed, especially for the new employees.
 
Secondly, having a work with quick and several mistakes will need more time to correct and fix it. Doing things correct at the first time can save a lot of time to editing it. For example, last weekend, to finish my history project quickly, I used only two hours to finish it and used other time to enjoy in TV. When this week, I saw my scores and mistakes which astonished me a lot since I almost got F and there were half of the essay had mistaken. After that, I followed professor’s instructions and spent more than five days to edit it which took me lots of time to do that. Therefore, it is more important to focus on accuracy and have a slowly work pace than to work with high speed and several mistakes.

Admittedly, some skeptics may claim that in today’s world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct since people need to keep pace with the fast modern pace. However, what the fast means is that basing exact or accuracy of the work, people need to save time to have an efficient work. Therefore, accuracy is the basic factor to speed up.

All in all, I highly suggest that everyone pay more attention to accuracy of a work instead of only pursuing the quick and ignore mistakes.

Author’s Notes:

🤪Argumentative article~