Jenny’s free writing 1

Freeeee writing~

I believe that accepting criticism can improve the efficiency of working in a group. To be more specific, due to receiving some comments from others, we can know instantly about our weakness that need to be addressed. Therefore, next time, when we face the same situation, we can avoid the same negative consequences and save time. Others’ perspectives just like a mirror that can tell us what is the shortcomings. I think of no better illustration for this point than the example from my experience. Once I was having a presentation in my groups and I do not know why I can not do it well. Then, my classmates, also my group members, pointed out several parts that I need to improve.. I listened carefully what they said and thought about it. They said I need to be careful about something that I take or granted, such as mannerisms and repeated words. I remembered the things that I need to modify and practice for several times. After a week, I presented in the whole class and teachers regarded me as the best presenter. If I did not accept my group members’ criticism, I can not do such an excellent job on my class presentation. Obviously, this instance may inform us that other’s criticism can help us to amend some inappropriate habits effectively. 😁